Found a way into #21. Rewrote the really stale opening I had in the script that I lost. Now instead of meandering it starts with a fairly vicious joke. Things I’ve learned: 1) It’s kind of a pain in the ass to rewrite from memory. But it’s a start. It’s definitely better though. The deal is to cut back and forth between two sequences for the whole issue. In theory anyway.
3 pages in. Just gotta keep working at it.
Listening: Sea and Cake, Crystal Castles, NIN
Nas lost his rhyme book for Illmatic and says he was better off, reshaping things in your head can work.
By: 3.0kafka on May 9, 2008
at 1:32 am
Yeah it certainly does clarify stuff. Of course Nas= better than me. At least back then.
By: sean witzke on May 9, 2008
at 7:45 pm
Supervillain is the writing log/linkdump/youtube video depository of Sean Witzke. I am a 23yr old aspiring comics writer/ college student/ delivery boy/ tv drone/ borderline schizophrenic. Y’know, like Philip J Fry.
Mainly I'm writing a longform spy-fi comics series, called FANTASTIC DAMAGE. And officially, we will never stay on topic. 
